MISSION: GRAMMAR
SENTENCE
BOUNDARIES
CRACK THE CODE
TASK 1
THE DATA SCAN
THE SCOREBOARD
OBJECTIVE: Lower your error count.
We are moving from "Mistake Hunting" to "Precision Writing."
THE TARGET: <= 3
We want no more than 3 mistakes in your first 50 words.
Check your report: How close were you?ERRANT PATTERNS
The ERRANT script finds your habits:
- Spelling?
- Verbs?
- Sentence Structure?
MISTAKE 1: CAPITALIZATION
TASK 2
ZERO TOLERANCE
1. THE COMMA SPLICE
A comma is too weak to hold two sentences.
❌ I am tired, I go to bed.
✅ I am tired. I go to bed.
2. THE FUSED SENTENCE
No wall at all! Thoughts crash.
❌ I am tired I go to bed.
✅ I am tired. I go to bed.
3. THE INFINITE FLOW
Going on forever.
❌ ...because I am tired and because...
✅ One 'because' is okay. Two is illegal.
TASK 3
SEARCH SCAN
SCAN YOUR REPORT
Look for your Repair Target boxes.
Identify if you have committed the 3 crimes.
Write your findings on the worksheet.
CASE STUDY
ELON MUSK
- Founder of SpaceX and CEO of Tesla.
- Founded SpaceX in 2002 to develop spacecraft.
- Leading electric vehicles since 2004.
- Focus: Changing travel on Earth and Space.
FIND THE BARRIER
Elon Musk is a successful man he takes many risks to get here.
THE INVISIBLE WALL
Elon Musk is a successful man. He takes many risks to get here.
THE 3 TARGETS
Find and fix these errors in the next task.
TASK 4
THE 7 REPAIRS
THE BIG FIX
Complete Task 3 on your worksheet.
Find the invisible walls and add gateways.
ANSWER 1
I am so tired. I want to go to bed.
ANSWER 2
She is very kind. Everyone likes her.
ANSWER 3
My friend lives in London. Meanwhile, I live in Bangkok.
ANSWER 4
We went to the mall. We bought some new shoes.
ANSWER 5
...because fear stops us. It makes us feel small and we lose...
ANSWER 6
The movie was long. Therefore, people left.
ANSWER 7
Success takes risk. Without risk you cannot grow. Failure is a lesson.
TASK 5
FINAL BOSS
PERSONAL REPAIR
1. Look at your original writing.
2. Make sure you are not repeating the mistakes I identified.
3. Make sure you do not write the "3 crimes".
MISSION ACCOMPLISHED
Your writing is now clearer and professional.